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Ulquiorra Returns Comic p34  The shadow by Shabriri-Lin Ulquiorra Returns Comic p34  The shadow by Shabriri-Lin
Page 34 of my bleach doujinshi about what happened after Ichigo blew his cero over Ulquiorra T_T
It's read from left to right..

I'm sorry only two pannels this time ^^;

The tooth pain has hardly allowed me to sleep this week and I've been feeling kinda weak.. so ..:cries:

..and besides.. I thought was a good idea to leave for you to guess who is that shadow hidding in the ruins behind the girl *^w^*

nah.. you surely know who it is? ne?? *^^*

please comment or fave ne? :tears:

the translation!! (please help! )

"How touching!"

"The faithfull and inflexible Ulquiorra being so lenient, in spite of the seriousness of the misconduct? I must admit I'm slightly surprised.."

Edit: Thanks :iconfalldance: for corrections! :hug::heart:

Edit: I changed a little the text because my friend sara was right when she told me it is not sarcastic enough to fit the character :P
I'm going to need English correction again ^^;

I hope you can guess who the shadow is now ;P

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:iconxxxihime-chanxxx:
xXxIhime-chanxXx Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2010  Hobbyist
Ooh! She has two colored eyes! How cool is that?! But lovely page as always ^^
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:iconshabriri-lin:
Shabriri-Lin Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2010
Thanks!!:hug:
next page is uploaded already *^_^*
[link]
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:iconxxxihime-chanxxx:
xXxIhime-chanxXx Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2010  Hobbyist
You're welcome!

Oh, thanks for the link. You didn't have to do that XD
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:iconshabriri-lin:
Shabriri-Lin Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2010
haha! you're right! XD
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:iconxxxihime-chanxxx:
xXxIhime-chanxXx Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2010  Hobbyist
But thanks though X3
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:iconreyhai:
ReyHai Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2010
OMG!! She's being stalked!! No, i guess it's Nnoitra...is it?
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:iconshabriri-lin:
Shabriri-Lin Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2010
hehehe!!Lets see *^_^*
I'll try to upload next page today ;)

Thanks for th coment!! :hug::heart:
And sorry the late reply :tears:

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:iconreyhai:
ReyHai Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2010
Np at all Lin :)
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:iconshabriri-lin:
Shabriri-Lin Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2010
posted alredy! *^_^*
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:iconreyhai:
ReyHai Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2010
And i red it!
Great! And i can't wait to see what Nadas sword looks like!
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:iconshabriri-lin:
Shabriri-Lin Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2010
Thanks!!:hug:
I'll try to finish it soon *^_^*
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:iconkuchikirukia-san:
KuchikiRukia-san Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
hi,Lin-chan!i'm happy to see your work...unfortunately,i have no time to read all,but i'll read it as soon as possible!!!your work is very well done,congratulations!!!i hope you understand my English....
xxx
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:iconshabriri-lin:
Shabriri-Lin Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2010
Thank you very much!! :blowkiss:

Don't worry!
I have very little free time too :tears:

Your english is perfect! :hug:
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Lavender-Soul Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2010  Student Digital Artist
:love: I always love the way you do her hair, so long and flowing. :huggle: Lovely ~ :iconhihilove:
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:iconshabriri-lin:
Shabriri-Lin Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2010
Thanks!!!! :hug:
I wish I had a hair like that , hehe ^^;
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:iconzania85:
Zania85 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2010
Xke me da ke el ke acaba de hablar es Gin?
XP
Esta muy chulo el doujin, espero que lo sigas pronto ^^
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:iconshabriri-lin:
Shabriri-Lin Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2010
Muchisimas gracias!!!:hug:
Jeje!! podria ser Gin .. por el tono .. y podria ser otro jojo!

intentare subir una nueva pagina hoy *^_^*

Y perdon por la demora en contestar :tears:
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XD-eviltoast-XD Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
my guess is nnoitra, gin, grimmjow, or szayel.. :) maybe even arroniero. :)
well done! :)
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:iconshabriri-lin:
Shabriri-Lin Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2010
Thanks!!!!!:huggle:
Sorry the late reply :cries:

Hehe!! we will see.. *^w^*
I'll try to upload a new page today :P
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XD-eviltoast-XD Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
its definately okay, hun :)
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:icondncelladelaluna:
dncelladelaluna Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2010
Apostaría una galleta a que es Grimmjow!
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:iconshabriri-lin:
Shabriri-Lin Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2010
Apuesta anotada!!!jejeje!!:P
Perdon por la demora en contestar :tears:

Y muchas gracias por comentar!!:blowkiss:
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dncelladelaluna Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2010
De nada!! es que me gusta un chorro tu doujinshi... y no te preocupes, has de tener otras cosas quehacer, yo ni siquera le he seguido al mío....
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:iconshabriri-lin:
Shabriri-Lin Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2010
de verdad? :dance:
Me hace mucha ilusion que te guste!!:hug:
es el primer comic largo que publico! *^_^*
Y ya le queda poquito para acabar ^_^
Tu estabas haciendo uno? no lo he visto aun.. me lo enseñas? *^^*
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dncelladelaluna Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2010
Claro, está en mi galería en la carpeta de Heart's Cries, tengo la historia terminada y publicada en mi blogspot, pero voy a modificarla un poco para el doujinshi.
¿Está por terminar? Aww, lo bueno es que fue una buena historia, y me gusta como dibujas, yo no puedo expresar movimiento todavia T_T pero bespero mejora :D
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:iconshabriri-lin:
Shabriri-Lin Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2010
Luego lo miro sin falta!!:dance:
Ahora tengo que salir volando que mi papa quiere que vaya con el al supermercado. ^_^
acabo de subir la pagina 35 ^_~
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:icondncelladelaluna:
dncelladelaluna Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2010
ok, ya la veo!!
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Kyuuketsuki91 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
oh forgot to say, this was awesome drawings as always! :3 kyaaaaa! Me need to know who that guy issssssssssss! <:3
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:iconshabriri-lin:
Shabriri-Lin Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2010
hahaha!! Thank you so much!!! :happycry:
Sorry the late reply, I'll try to submit next page today *^_^*
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:iconkyuuketsuki91:
Kyuuketsuki91 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
oh oh oh oh oh oh oh! I think I know who it is! D: its that pink haired guy... Or the way he talked kinda reminds me of him >_< heh, I call him Pinky Finky little pet! >=D
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:iconshabriri-lin:
Shabriri-Lin Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2010
hehe!! Aporro?
I like him too!!*^_^*
Lets see who the guy is in next page :P
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:iconyukisentai:
yukisentai Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2010
Wooo! Awesome!! Love this new page! My best guess is either Nnoitra or Grimmjow.
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:iconshabriri-lin:
Shabriri-Lin Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2010
Thanks you so much!!!!:hug::heart::heart:
Those two have many votes too *^_^*
Lets see next page *^w^*
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yukisentai Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2010
:excited:
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:iconfalldance:
falldance Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hmmm...I'm thinking the mysterious person is either Nnoitora, Grimmjow, or Gin. I'm not too certain which one of them the shadow happens to be though. :surrender:

Sorry to hear that your toothache hasn't gone away. I don't know if this website will be of any use [link] It is basically home remedies to help reduce pain caused by a toothache. Hopefully the toothache will be gone soon!

For your translating the word 'seriousness' is misspelled. That was the only spelling error that I saw.

I did notice when I attempted translating the second sentence it came out a bit differently. I came up with, 'I am surprised that Ulquiorra has been so lenient given the seriousness of the misconduct.' I think either translation works.
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:iconshabriri-lin:
Shabriri-Lin Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2010
Hehe! I must admit that when I drew it I didn't care too much about the resemblance between the character and his shadow though.. ^^;
it's just a quick black figure ^^; So it can be any of the above :)
we will see next page ^^

Thanks so much for the link!!:dance:
"remedios caseros" I think its gonna help me a lot since the dentist gave me some pain killers but i can't take them cuz they cause me stomachache :tears:

Thanks for your help with the translation too!!:hug: I'll replace my translation with yours ;)
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:iconfalldance:
falldance Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol, I can wait for the next page.

Your welcome. Sorry to hear that the pain killers seem to be making things worse for ya.
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Shabriri-Lin Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2010
Next page is up already *^_^*

Thank you again for the website:)
The remedy with garlick helped me.
Now I hardly feel pain and I can wait for the dentist next appintment on 12 th april ^_^
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:iconfalldance:
falldance Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Your welcome.
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Yakai Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2010
ame la pagina amix!! *-*, para mi esta entre gin o grimmjow xD aunque no se para mi es alguien mas, pero, en este momento no se me ocurre T_T

bueno estare al pendiente de tu doujin!!

besos!

atte.Yakai
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:iconshabriri-lin:
Shabriri-Lin Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2010
Muchas gracias!!:hug:
Me alegro que te guste!!
Anoto tus apuestas!! *^_^*
Intentare tener lista la sig pagina pronto!:blowkiss:
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:iconyakai:
Yakai Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2010
amix estas en el msm?? O.o
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:iconshabriri-lin:
Shabriri-Lin Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2010
no ^^ iba a marcharme ya para dejarle el compi a mi padre un rato que esta enfadado ^^U
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:iconmondaylong:
MondayLong Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2010
muy bueno! sabes cómo dejar la intriga!
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:iconshabriri-lin:
Shabriri-Lin Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2010
Gracias!!!:hug::heart: Jeje! Me alegro mucho que te guste:)
tratare de tener lista la proxima pagina tan pronto pueda!
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sasoridelaarenaroja Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2010
yo creo que es gin! xDD me gusta mucho la primera viñeta ^^
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:iconshabriri-lin:
Shabriri-Lin Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2010
apuesta anotada jejeje!
Muchas gracias:hug:
Me inspire un poco en la pelicula muda de Nosferatu :)
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sasoridelaarenaroja Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2010
nosferatu mola!!! :heart:
de nada ^^
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:iconshabriri-lin:
Shabriri-Lin Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2010
si!!^^
:hug:
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:iconsuperaura:
superaura Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Grimmjow ha de ser, si fuera NnoiNoi ya habríamos visto su cuchara... aunque también podría ser Szayel, o Aaroniero!

por cierto, en mi regalo he dibujado a tu oc de cuyo nombre nunca logro enterarme (cosa k ya me está sacando de quicio por otro lado). simplifiqué bastante su pelo, pero creo k se ve mona de todas maneras :3
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